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Type:TRAINER Chapter 1 Page 38 by lilmarisa Type:TRAINER Chapter 1 Page 38 by lilmarisa
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LOOK HOW HAPPY THEY ARE ;w;

What could possibly spoil this moment?

Well, for starters, if Ash were to suddenly become Deadpool for some inexplicable reason, he might notice something wrong...
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You did a good job i never seen anything like this before, keep up the good work. You should keep working on the comics so nobody is just hanging around. I understand it's a lot of hard work to make the comics. You also make it like it's happening like it's on tv to me. I love to watch pokemon and it's like a new season with oliver as the main character. Some times the work doesn't come out the way you want it, right, so you should always try, try again and it may just come out the way you want it to be.
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drahonlover Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
Awww, Happy Oliver...Freak out session much!!! XDDD

I wonder if he'll notice the resemblance between the Pikachu and Ash...:iconthinkingplz:
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animamomentlover Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
some how i had a feeling ash will be the first pokemon who doesnt attack him :D
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Flowtail Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2011
AW SO CUTE IT BURNS AHHH why do you force me to keep reading at 11:00????
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
♥♥♥
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Pinksneasel Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
I want to steal Ashchu and make him my plushie.:3
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
D: You wanna kill and stuff him?
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Pinksneasel Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
When when you say it that way it makes me sound evil.XD
Naw, Just constantly hug him all the time like a little girl with a brand new puppy.X3
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehehe, get in line~
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billycosun Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011
you realize that if you do then all of the other times ash has become ashchu will come barreling at you.
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radiantsilverfire Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2011
squeeee! last pane so cute!!
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:3 thanks!!
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wanlingnic Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Student General Artist
*rapes the favourite button*

You've somehow managed to made the back of my nose tingle. *sniff* I'm such it's sinuses, but... *sniff* GAH. Between this and page 39, I shed a single tear for the beginnings of this bromance. It's so beautiful.
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww, thank you. I hope it continues to evoke emotion in you. ♥ It's always nice when something you're reading gives you that tingle, huh? x3

It will be... a rad bromance! 8D
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FER-PMD Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
Im reading all of your comics!!!!! Ash is a pikachu now, adrenaline shot.
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you like it!
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FER-PMD Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
yay!!!
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Mavrickindigo Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I could just imagine a mad scientist doing this to Ash just for the laughs
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner May 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha maybe ;D
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reapergeek Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011
So. Much. LOVE for that last panel. It's the kind of image I'd love to use as an icon (not going to, don't worry). The panel with Pikachu (or Ashachu as it were) climbing up onto the couch is a close second favourite. I love Oliver's expression and body movement.
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! 83 I love coming up with new poses, so I'm glad it's working.
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TheShadowDarkrai Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011
and befre anyone asks why, I`ll explain.
1: There will be an aproximate of 325 bad guys on his back due to him screaming so much everywhere, Probably attracting attention, as well as those people out there who cant keep their mouth shut.
2:also, He'll wack-up everyone within 50 feet of his mouth, therefore attracting even MORE attention(which by the way, he may not need too much of right now)
3: finally, He shall cause various other seeds of unhappiness to be planted and grown.
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Indeed, but that's just assuming he can be understood! ;3
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TheShadowDarkrai Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
k.
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TheShadowDarkrai Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011
O_O

He really needs to quit flappin his lips beecause if someone CAN understand him,(like mario) He`s-a gonna be in a woooooooorld of trouble.
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shinxthinx Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i want more :(
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Soon, very soon~
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PokemonTrainerLisa Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
Awwww, cuteness overload! Ashachu looks ADORABLE here! :aww: And I just love Oliver's expressions. They're great!! :D

And even though I knew Ash wouldn't attack Oliver, that didn't make this moment any less meaningful. I'm happy for Oliver, and it looks like he's thrilled too! He's having tears of happiness! :)

However, if no one can understand Ash, there's no possible way they can link him to being a smart Pikachu, let alone a human. XD Aww, poor Ash. Looks like he needs a miracle. XD Oliver just got a miracle, so maybe Ash will get one too? ;D

And by the way, I loved how you left it vague and didn't let us know whether or not Oliver can understand Ash. I'm pretty sure Ashleigh can't understand him. But wow, from the looks of it, there might be TWO reasons why Oliver is scared/freaked out. The first, is the obvious "OMG, it's gonna attack me! It's gonna attack me!" thing, and the other is "Ahhhh! It's a talking Pikachu! I must be losing my mind!". XD

If my prediction is correct, that would mean panel 10 has a double-meaning, which would be very clever. First of all, Oliver is crying because a Pokemon FINALLY isn't attacking him. Hooray!! :D And then maybe, Oliver is also crying because he knows Ash is still alive (having understood Ashachu). That could be a possible scenario. ^^

But really, as far as Ashachu stories go, the sky is the limit. There's endless possibilities that could happen in this comic. And I'll be happy with anything you come up with. :)
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!! I worked very hard on getting the expressions right. I'm so glad they made an impact! ^___^

Still, even if they can't understand Ash, that doesn't necessarily mean he can't get a message across. He just needs to be a little bit... creative. ;D

I always love these long, detailed comments... and I'm glad you've been sticking around so long ♥
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PokemonTrainerLisa Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011
You're welcome! ^__^

And ah, you're right. Ash certainly has ways of being creative. I know that whenever he's in a tight spot, he usually figures *something* out. And this time won't be any different. :)

And awwww, thanks. :aww:

Well, what can I say? XD I really love watching the show, especially the old episodes (like it says in my signature, I LOVE watching the 4Kids dub). In fact, I am trying to collect all 8 seasons of the 4Kids dub on DVD, lol. I have the first boxset of season 1 (still need to get the other 2 sets), and I own ALL of season 2, season 5, and season 6. I just need to complete season 1, and get the rest of the volumes for seasons 7 and 8.

Anyway, back on topic, of course, "Hocus Pokemon" is one of my favorite episodes. I love Ashachu, and I think you are doing a fantastic job on this comic. :excited:

Overall, I really have no problems with your comic, to be honest. In fact, it seems the only thing I don't like about it (and this is a minor gripe which doesn't have anything to do with the plot) is the fact that it's set in the D/P series. I would've preferred the story to be set in Johto before Ash went to the Johto League, or any time during Hoenn (with Ash, Brock, May, and Max), but that's just me being picky. LOL. XD

By the way, I don't know if I mentioned this or not. XD Anyway, the Pokemon Advanced episode "Stairway to Devon" always reminded me of Ashachu, because of one scene in particular. The president of the Devon corporation, Mr. Stone, gives Max a tour of the Devon building. In one room, there are a bunch of *unfinished* inventions they are working on. And, low and behold, one of the company's inventions just happens to be: a machine that is supposed to turn a human into a Pokemon!! (Unfortunately, that machine wasn't finished yet, so Max couldn't try it out) XD

Anyway, I always wondered what Ash's reaction to that machine would've been, if he had been in the room at the time. I'm sure it would've been PRICELESS. XD Curse you, anime writers, for not letting Ash be "reminded" that he's been a Pikachu before. XD /end rant
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TrioBadge Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011  Student General Artist
Hmm... ASH ATTACK!!>:D... Why the hell aren't you attacking!?D:<... Meh i'll just get my super fast and awesome Zebstrika to beat Oliver up then!:XD:
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He's not a normal pokemon, though~ ;D
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Foxtrot78 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
Very nice page. The 3 panels with Oliver's hands & Ashchu's ears looks like you spend a bit of time on them... the way he flips his ears around and expressions as the hand approaches makes me wonder about instincts that may have been implanted - it's a very natural reaction.

The last panel is cute, I wonder if Oliver's scratching him too (a pikachu's not exactly a dog though...)
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! ^___^ I actually went through the trouble of taking photos in my hands in the poses I wanted, and tracing over them... normally I wouldn't bother and would just reference a mirror or my own hand, but those panels were too important to risk it x3

Right now it's just affectionately cupping his face, but he might get scritches later. :3
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Electric-Raichu Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah, I have to agree you've pulled off this scene really well.

I still think Ash should've electrocuted him ;-) :lol:
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, well, it wouldn't work with how the rest of the story will play out ;D
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Kuranue Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aw oliver is happy. you know ash isn't that dense he can at least understand when someone isn't understanding him.
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oliver hasn't given him any indication, really. ;3
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Kuranue Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
true dat. True dat.
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Zoraidaz Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This page is gorgeous <3 Please don't spoil the moment! xDDD
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww ♥
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mihane100 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:O I don't think Oliver can hear him!
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
maybe not~
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mihane100 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:o I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm so happy that you have uploaded the next page!
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me too! ^^ It's a load off my mind, hehe. I'll get the next page up asap~
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mihane100 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
;) YAY!
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Shadymissionary Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011
Great!

How soon can the next page be up?
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
w-what?? xD;; Cut me some slack, man!

I try to make the updates a week apart, at the most...
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PokemonTrainerLisa Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011
Oh wow, a week apart. In that case, it's like watching the new episodes of Pokemon. There's always a week in bewtween, and you have to wait to find out what happens next. XD

The suspense is killing me! I must know what happens next! LOL, just kidding. I'm not that impatient, but your story IS awesome. XD
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lilmarisa Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha, kind of! ♥

We're barely into the plot yet, a lot's gonna happen later... ;)
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PokemonTrainerLisa Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011
Ooh, that sounds interesting and exciting. I can't wait!! :D
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